From: Â Â Â jason walsmith
Subject: Â Â Â Re: tweak
Date: Â Â Â January 7, 2009 9:59:31 PM CST
To: Â Â Â mike butterworth
like some changes a lot, i am shocked and alarmed by others. can you bring the originals tomorrow? try to resist the urge to “lose” them.
Hey! let’s get together tonight and polish . . . yes?
jason
On Jan 7, 2009, at 9:55 PM, Mike Butterworth wrote:
The third verse is my fave and a totally differnt feel than the other two. check out my initial thoughts to basically add sylabels to the other two verses to unify. New words are in lower case. anything in ( ) are alternate words
Don’t Ignore Our Love
V1:
(You’re )IT’S COLD
And YOU seem to KNOW
Just when I’ll FOLD
BECAUSE I’M EASILY BROKEN
ALTHOUGH
IT’S TIME TO GO
You move NICE AND SLOW
With WORDS LEFT UNSPOKEN (Leaving words unspoken)
PC:
RISE AND JOIN THE ENEMY
CHORUS:
OUR LOVE’S A BITTER WAR
‘CAUSE MY HEART’S BEEN HURT BEFORE
PLEASE DON’T IGNORE
OUR LOVE, OUR LOVE
V2:
DON’T TWIST
ON MY delicate WRIST
JUST TO GET yourself KISSED
‘cause THIS IS EASILY BROKEN
WITH NO RISK
DON’T try to RESIST
JUST call and ENLIST
IT’S SILENTLY SPOKEN
PC:
CHORUS:
V3:
IT HURTS
WHEN YOU SHAKE YOUR SKIRT
AND YOU DESERT
ME WHEN I’M BROKEN
SO ALERT
YOU TURN DUST INTO DIRT
YOUR’RE A DANGEROUS FLIRT
WITH WORDS THAT AREN’T SPOKEN